Smelting Memories
Written By
Alec Preclaro & Niquel Nussear
INT. OF WORKSHOP-DAY
Airon, Beefy, bald, and bearded blacksmith with multiple
tattoos and a stern expression picks something up
His facial expression softens and becomes anime-like as he
looks at a picture of a small child, his daughter.
A welding mask swoops down onto his head.
Title wipes across screen as Airon walks out.
The sounds of welding and drilling are heard as the
animation is introduced. Sparks notably fly out from the
bottom right corner.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A toy magazine lays on a blacksmith's workbench, Airon runs
his finger underneath a picture of a cute doll.
Airon smiles and picks up his welder
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
Airon pours steaming hot substance into a mold, then throws
the mold into water.
Hissing noise of steam.
He breaks open the cast (porcilen breaking sound effect) and
begins hammering (hammering noises)it over a fire. He throws
it in the kiln and pulls it out multiple times.
Airon welds pieces together. (sound of open flame)
(TRANSITION IS MADE OF STEAM)
We see a ugly doll lying on the workbench. Blacksmith looks
proud at first, but then his face falls to a frown.
A thought bubble pops up of his daughter disappointed and
crying, sad that the doll isn't pretty.
Airon waves the thought bubble away and throws the doll into
SAME MONTOGUE AS BEFORE PLAYS, THIS TIME TWICE AS FAST.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A creepy, life sized doll lays on the workbench.
A thought bubble of his daughter screaming and running away
pops up. The creepy doll is wreaking havoc in the thought,
and the bubble disappears suddenly from the real doll's arm
swiping it away. Blacksmith ducks away and hammers it down.
He looks around and notices the broken workbench and torn
magazine.
Airon picks up the pieces and begins to reforge them as the
scene fades to night.
EXT. OF NORMAL HOUSE, MORNING
A large party of people surround the daughter, who is
happily opening presents.
Airon nervously hands his daughter her present, focusing on
his face and his daughters back.
The crowd shuffles nervously and a few murmurs are heard.
Daughter rips away the wrapping paper and its a normal doll!
The crowd sighs in relief as the daughter happily jumps
around with her dall. Suddenly a sword pops out of the dolls
head and the crowd gasps.
Airon is embarrassed about the event.
Daughter's face lights up and begins to ruin the other
presents and is soon surrounded by a pile of stuffing and
wrecked toys.
The rest of the crowd seems shocked but happy?
Daughter hugs Airon amongst the pile of stuffing and the
rest of the crowd claps.
FADE OUT
Alec Preclaro & Niquel Nussear
INT. OF WORKSHOP-DAY
Airon, Beefy, bald, and bearded blacksmith with multiple
tattoos and a stern expression picks something up
His facial expression softens and becomes anime-like as he
looks at a picture of a small child, his daughter.
A welding mask swoops down onto his head.
Title wipes across screen as Airon walks out.
The sounds of welding and drilling are heard as the
animation is introduced. Sparks notably fly out from the
bottom right corner.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A toy magazine lays on a blacksmith's workbench, Airon runs
his finger underneath a picture of a cute doll.
Airon smiles and picks up his welder
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
Airon pours steaming hot substance into a mold, then throws
the mold into water.
Hissing noise of steam.
He breaks open the cast (porcilen breaking sound effect) and
begins hammering (hammering noises)it over a fire. He throws
it in the kiln and pulls it out multiple times.
Airon welds pieces together. (sound of open flame)
(TRANSITION IS MADE OF STEAM)
We see a ugly doll lying on the workbench. Blacksmith looks
proud at first, but then his face falls to a frown.
A thought bubble pops up of his daughter disappointed and
crying, sad that the doll isn't pretty.
Airon waves the thought bubble away and throws the doll into
SAME MONTOGUE AS BEFORE PLAYS, THIS TIME TWICE AS FAST.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A creepy, life sized doll lays on the workbench.
A thought bubble of his daughter screaming and running away
pops up. The creepy doll is wreaking havoc in the thought,
and the bubble disappears suddenly from the real doll's arm
swiping it away. Blacksmith ducks away and hammers it down.
He looks around and notices the broken workbench and torn
magazine.
Airon picks up the pieces and begins to reforge them as the
scene fades to night.
EXT. OF NORMAL HOUSE, MORNING
A large party of people surround the daughter, who is
happily opening presents.
Airon nervously hands his daughter her present, focusing on
his face and his daughters back.
The crowd shuffles nervously and a few murmurs are heard.
Daughter rips away the wrapping paper and its a normal doll!
The crowd sighs in relief as the daughter happily jumps
around with her dall. Suddenly a sword pops out of the dolls
head and the crowd gasps.
Airon is embarrassed about the event.
Daughter's face lights up and begins to ruin the other
presents and is soon surrounded by a pile of stuffing and
wrecked toys.
The rest of the crowd seems shocked but happy?
Daughter hugs Airon amongst the pile of stuffing and the
rest of the crowd claps.
FADE OUT
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