Wednesday, May 18, 2016
ScriptP2Final_18
Smelting Memories
Written By
Alec Preclaro & Niquel Nussear
INT. OF WORKSHOP-DAY
Airon, Beefy, bald, and bearded blacksmith with multiple
tattoos and a stern expression picks something up
His facial expression softens and becomes anime-like as he
looks at a picture of a small child, his daughter.
A welding mask swoops down onto his head.
Title wipes across screen as Airon walks out.
The sounds of welding and drilling are heard as the
animation is introduced. Sparks notably fly out from the
bottom right corner.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A toy magazine lays on a blacksmith's workbench, Airon runs
his finger underneath a picture of a cute doll.
Airon smiles and picks up his welder
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
Airon pours steaming hot substance into a mold, then throws
the mold into water.
Hissing noise of steam.
He breaks open the cast (porcilen breaking sound effect) and
begins hammering (hammering noises)it over a fire. He throws
it in the kiln and pulls it out multiple times.
Airon welds pieces together. (sound of open flame)
(TRANSITION IS MADE OF STEAM)
We see a ugly doll lying on the workbench. Blacksmith looks
proud at first, but then his face falls to a frown.
A thought bubble pops up of his daughter disappointed and
crying, sad that the doll isn't pretty.
Airon waves the thought bubble away and throws the doll into
SAME MONTOGUE AS BEFORE PLAYS, THIS TIME TWICE AS FAST.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A creepy, life sized doll lays on the workbench.
A thought bubble of his daughter screaming and running away
pops up. The creepy doll is wreaking havoc in the thought,
and the bubble disappears suddenly from the real doll's arm
swiping it away. Blacksmith ducks away and hammers it down.
He looks around and notices the broken workbench and torn
magazine.
Airon picks up the pieces and begins to reforge them as the
scene fades to night.
EXT. OF NORMAL HOUSE, MORNING
A large party of people surround the daughter, who is
happily opening presents.
Airon nervously hands his daughter her present, focusing on
his face and his daughters back.
The crowd shuffles nervously and a few murmurs are heard.
Daughter rips away the wrapping paper and its a normal doll!
The crowd sighs in relief as the daughter happily jumps
around with her dall. Suddenly a sword pops out of the dolls
head and the crowd gasps.
Airon is embarrassed about the event.
Daughter's face lights up and begins to ruin the other
presents and is soon surrounded by a pile of stuffing and
wrecked toys.
The rest of the crowd seems shocked but happy?
Daughter hugs Airon amongst the pile of stuffing and the
rest of the crowd claps.
FADE OUT
Alec Preclaro & Niquel Nussear
INT. OF WORKSHOP-DAY
Airon, Beefy, bald, and bearded blacksmith with multiple
tattoos and a stern expression picks something up
His facial expression softens and becomes anime-like as he
looks at a picture of a small child, his daughter.
A welding mask swoops down onto his head.
Title wipes across screen as Airon walks out.
The sounds of welding and drilling are heard as the
animation is introduced. Sparks notably fly out from the
bottom right corner.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A toy magazine lays on a blacksmith's workbench, Airon runs
his finger underneath a picture of a cute doll.
Airon smiles and picks up his welder
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
Airon pours steaming hot substance into a mold, then throws
the mold into water.
Hissing noise of steam.
He breaks open the cast (porcilen breaking sound effect) and
begins hammering (hammering noises)it over a fire. He throws
it in the kiln and pulls it out multiple times.
Airon welds pieces together. (sound of open flame)
(TRANSITION IS MADE OF STEAM)
We see a ugly doll lying on the workbench. Blacksmith looks
proud at first, but then his face falls to a frown.
A thought bubble pops up of his daughter disappointed and
crying, sad that the doll isn't pretty.
Airon waves the thought bubble away and throws the doll into
SAME MONTOGUE AS BEFORE PLAYS, THIS TIME TWICE AS FAST.
INT. OF WORKSHOP-CONTINUED
A creepy, life sized doll lays on the workbench.
A thought bubble of his daughter screaming and running away
pops up. The creepy doll is wreaking havoc in the thought,
and the bubble disappears suddenly from the real doll's arm
swiping it away. Blacksmith ducks away and hammers it down.
He looks around and notices the broken workbench and torn
magazine.
Airon picks up the pieces and begins to reforge them as the
scene fades to night.
EXT. OF NORMAL HOUSE, MORNING
A large party of people surround the daughter, who is
happily opening presents.
Airon nervously hands his daughter her present, focusing on
his face and his daughters back.
The crowd shuffles nervously and a few murmurs are heard.
Daughter rips away the wrapping paper and its a normal doll!
The crowd sighs in relief as the daughter happily jumps
around with her dall. Suddenly a sword pops out of the dolls
head and the crowd gasps.
Airon is embarrassed about the event.
Daughter's face lights up and begins to ruin the other
presents and is soon surrounded by a pile of stuffing and
wrecked toys.
The rest of the crowd seems shocked but happy?
Daughter hugs Airon amongst the pile of stuffing and the
rest of the crowd claps.
FADE OUT
BeatPlotP2Final_18
Smelting Memories
Logline: A rustic blacksmith attempts to make his six year old daughter a doll for her birthday, but is only skilled at making medieval weapons.
Genre: humor
Beat Sheet:
Opening Image: Airon Mc SteelWood, a proud father, and accomplished blacksmith, looks adoringly at a photograph of his daughter, puts it down then throws on a welding mask, walking off and sparks start flying offscreen
The Catalyst : A toy catalogue placed on the workbench indicates the toy Airon is trying to make for his daughter’s birthday.
The Mid‐point: The first doll ends up looking very ugly and plain looking, while the second doll looks evil and tries to attack Airon.The father looks dejected at first but eventually picks up the pieces and starts over working into the night.
Break Into Three/Finale: A nervous father hands his gift to his daughter. All of the other party guest look on skeptically as she opens her gift. The gift appears to be a normal doll which relieves a lot of the guests but upon moving one of the arms a bunch of swords and maces and spikes and stuff shoot out of the doll creating a drastically dangerous weapon
Final Image: The daughter begins to use the toy to destroy all of her other birthday presents, overjoyed with its destructive nature. She leaps into her father's arm at the end.
Plot Summary:
A hard-working father is attempting to make a present for his daughter’s birthday but is an accomplished blacksmith who can only make medieval weaponry. During his work he accidently creates malfunctioning dolls, but at the birthday party he is able to give his daughter the present, and it’s actually a normal doll, but maybe it’s more than it appears.
A hard-working father is attempting to make a present for his daughter's birthday but it's only an accomplished blacksmith you can only make medieval weaponry. He looks at a toy catalog examining the toy that she wants the most a normal doll. His first attempt ends in Failure as it only appears to be a dangerous weapon he tries it out though one swing one plane swing destroys his work bench making him more than ever but also the so destroys the toy catalog make sure you get that part down. Pick up the pieces TV sees a picture of his daughter and is more devoted than ever to finish the tour he works into the night as we Fade to Black. In the morning we see the daughter opening a bunch of presents for her birthday she is happy but then the father approaches her with his present all the other guests at the party look skeptically as I know the father can only make weapons but the daughter does not seem to mind she opens the present eagerly and it surprised everyone and to everyone's surprise it is a normal doll a sigh of relief sorry for. But I really floats across the room as it seems all is well within the daughter moves the arm of the dog and a bunch of swords and just start shooting out from all sides. Worried now more than ever before not afraid enjoy your gift because she's cool like that she doesn't. She then destroy all the other gifts she got it Black Card credit Dunkin
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